Daily Progress – 1/15/2011

Working Title: Trinity

Today’s Word Count: 2,158

Excerpt:

However, when Simon looked at him, his eyes cooled, going flat, coldly assesing him. Kyle felt a small shiver running down his spine and he felt his feet hesitating. The primitive part of his mind was shrieking that this boy, this pale unassuming boy, was inherently dangerous and to turn around and run away as quickly as possible. Kyle turned a deaf ear to that part of his brain and kept walking towards the boy.

Thoughts:

It’s kind of difficult setting up a made-up place with made-up characters and try to make them living and breathing, wonderfully flawed creatures without sounding like I’m spending forever just explaining things to the reader in a tedious manner.